Fall From Grace
Review by Knicky Laurel, Writer
Author name: J. Edward Ritchie
Book Title: Fall From Grace
The Synopsis: Heaven: a paradise of all that is pure in Creation. Led by brothers Michael and Satanail, the Angelic Host is a testament to cosmic harmony and love. But when an unprecedented revelation threatens to uproot their peace, a schism splits the Host’s loyalties. Every angel has to make a choice: faith or freedom. Good or evil. Salvation or damnation.
War consumes Heaven in the first and most destructive loss of life that Creation will ever know. As brother turns on brother, the fate of Heaven and Earth rests in the hands of the Creator’s chosen son, Michael. How far will he go, what will he sacrifice in the name of their Father, to protect his family?
Witness the tragic downfall of a civilization told from both sides of a bloody rebellion. More than myth, more than legend, Heaven’s war will forever stand as a harrowing warning that even the purest of souls can fall from grace.
Length: 424 pages
Release date: January 14, 2015
Available formats: Paperback and Kindle from Amazon
Purchase link: Amazon: http://amzn.to/1Gcsr4c
Author Bio: J. Edward Ritchie grew up in Connecticut and attended Boston College. He worked as a screenwriter in Los Angeles for ten years before relocating with his wife to Cape Cod, Massachusetts. For his world creation style of fiction, he finds inspiration across literature, comics, films, and video games. Fall From Grace is his first novel.
“Michael stood at the precipice of a remote mountain that pierced the clouds like a monolith of natural grandeur.”
This opening line captures perfectly the crux of this story, with one of our two protagonists standing at the precipice of one of the most important decisions in heaven’s history, one that concerns the direction of angelkind, and future of angels and human beings both. That decision does pierce the peace that heaven has always known, as it rends the hosts into two factions – one which dedicates itself to protecting and serving humanity, and the other which seeks to destroy it and fly in the face of The Creator.
This is the story of heaven and hell, a story of angels and demons, of humans and hope. It is an account of the fall of Satan, the first humans and the origin of sin. The stage on which it is set is fascinating, the worldbuilding excellent and very imaginative. The best worldbuilding is the kind that can strike the balance between feeling full and leaving you genuinely curious, wanting to delve even deeper into that world. Ritchie strikes this balance well.
In tandem with its rich worldbuilding, Fall From Grace is a triumph of solid, if not stellar, characterization, with the interactions between the two protagonists being subtle and a point of much interest. However, it is Satanail’s development that I found slightly ill-paced and off-putting; personally, I would have liked to seen him struggle with the first lie he tells before telling it, for example. Up until that point in the story even though he had been characterized as spirited and in charge – perhaps even a bit overconfident and ego-driven – he was still a good and virtuous being, and so I found the sudden change in him jarring, especially so early on in the story.
That initial twisting of his character then seems only to occur for the convenience and service of the plot rather than for any other reason I could think of, and as a result he just comes across as evil by nature and design rather than by circumstance and situation. Despite that however, there are still great moments of character interaction and dialogue between him and Michael, moments that are quiet but disquieting, moments that – along with the lovely, clear descriptive prose and great, snappy dialogue – linger.
The overall pacing of the story unfolds quite well, as Ritchie takes on humanity’s impulse to believe in something unanswerable and bigger than everything that is, and tell its story. Through an awesome exploration of faith-based mythos and our insistent, insatiable hunger for salvation and hope, he weaves a high fantasy tale of truly epic proportions, and does so with a wonderful, effortless sense of how to craft a good story.
“The future is laden with secrets. Shall we uncover them together?” – Fall From Grace, J. Edward Ritchie.
Overall Orb Rating
4 Orbs – Shipshape (I enjoyed the journey)
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Review by Knicky Laurel, Writer
Author name: The Random Writers
Book Title: Stalking Leviathan: A Bestiary of Tales
The Synopsis: “It’s out there. I can feel it in my water. I can hear it…”
Twelve tales go in search of creatures of myth, legend, and the spaces between the real and the imagined. From the overwhelming confusion of the Irish Civil War to the eerie expanse of modern day Bodmin Moor; from Elizabethan England to the skies above Persia, the Random Writers quest for an answer to the question – What is the nature of the beast?
Length: 198 pages
Release date: September 27, 2016
Available formats: Paperback and eBook from Amazon
For the beast from which your careful order once sprang has returned to devour it whole. The name of that beast is Myth and Stalking Leviathan: A Bestiary of Tales, its hunting ground. I finished reading this third anthological instalment from The Random Writers a few days ago. It is a menagerie of the more obscure creatures of legend and lore. Everything from unicorns to chimeras to harpies is here, hidden between the pages, within stories of power, fantasy and intrigue. To quote a favoured line of mine: “Stepping into the enormous morning” of such an ambitious effort to weave words into new wonders, I found myself truly excited to see what gifts the writers would offer us this time and theme around.
It goes without saying that there is something here for everyone to enjoy. I also think it fair to say that it was a challenge to not compare this anthology with the one that preceded it. The truth of the matter is this collection of stories felt … slightly rushed to me, and resonated less with me than the one it followed. It didn’t seem as strong or to have the same tight finish as Something Rich and Strange. However, that is not to say there weren’t some pieces within it by which I was awakened and entranced, and it is on these I’ll focus.
I really enjoyed My Sister’s Shadow. Despite most everything being alluded to rather than openly stated – perhaps even because of this – I found it powerful and haunting. Written as journal entries in a strong, modern blogger’s voice, this story captures the spirit of Japanese culture to perfection and felt akin to reading manga or watching an anime in my mind. It is a tale of nature’s supremacy and dominion over human progress, its demand for human respect, and a vivid and fantastic opening to this anthology.
There was some great imagery in Kestrel and the Cryptonites, “a soft ethereal green that shimmered like the underside of leaves on a breezy day”, for example, and some fun lore in the existence of female wizards and the distinction between them and witches. The Pitcher Plant was spooky and well-written and any disappointment felt in the somewhat anticlimactic ending only serves to denote the degree to which I was invested in the story, and to which my expectations of some kind of face-off and resolution between the main character and the creature went unfulfilled.
Black Dog was also well-done; stellar story-telling and use of metaphor to depict the battle against depression as a monstrous, predatory shadow in the night, and how sometimes it takes an unforeseen force of good from beyond this earthly realm to beat back that darkness and pull one’s self into the sunlight. I thought The Bone Children and the Darkness was another beautifully-written piece as well, in which both madness and the interplay of love and fear felt convincing and true-to-life, uncomfortably so.
The Hounds of God was really strong too, from its opening imagery to its likeable, fun-to-read main character to its terrific use of language throughout. Honorable mention goes to both The Child of the Ghillie Dhu and Keep My Name Amongst the Dead, the former for its faerie tale feeling, the latter for its exotic flavor, and both for reminding me why I’ve loved stories all of my life. Here is the haunt of mythic beasts, beasts that stalk us, beasts we stalk in turn. Here is where they roam and hide and wait, between the pages, within the stories, to devour the careful order of civilization itself and in so doing, remind us who we are.
“The rice fields are old mirrors and the air is heavy with pollen.” – My Sister’s Shadow, Lorraine Wilson.
Overall Orb Rating
3.5 Orbs (rounded up to 4) – Shipshaped (I enjoyed the journey)
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Something Rich and Strange
Review by Knicky Laurel, Writer
Author name: The Random Writers
Book Title: Something Rich and Strange: The Past is Prologue
The Synopsis: ‘It started with the Zhar-ptitsa, the Firebird, as these things must. No, let us say it started again with the Firebird.’
A group of researchers open a door in the present day that has been closed for centuries – and should have stayed that way. In 1840s Ireland, starving children face desperate measures to avoid the crisis consuming the land. A visitor to 19th century Japan learns what it takes to fan love to life. A girl struggles to rise above the walls that surround her in Georgian England. In 7th century Britain, a scribe translates the true value of a legend. Fourteen surprising, moving and compelling tales, weaving the next steps in the telling of famous events and stories from Greek myth to English folktale, via fairy tales and real historical events. The second anthology from The Random Writers – this is Something Rich and Strange.
Length: 308 pages
Release date: 29th November, 2015
Available formats: Paperback from Amazon or Createspace Direct, eBook from Nook, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Apple and Smashwords.
“And so it ends.”
Or in the case of Something Rich and Strange: The Past is Prologue, begins again. I recently finished my first fantasy anthology read of 2016 and it couldn’t have made a more perfect beginning to a new year of stories to discover and explore. A marvel spun by The Random Writers from the fluid and infinite nature of Story itself, these are tales of wonder, a collection of rare and exotic fruit in a mythic orchard, each one bursting with secrets and truths untold. “What have you to offer me, poised on the edge of my life?” you might ask of it, to quote a favoured line of mine from this work. The answer is magic and sacrifice, power and loneliness, flight and despair. The answer is in its name.
Because this anthology is a many-splendored thing it would go without saying that it is resonant on myriad levels. You will find something, or someone, here to love. That is not to say it’s perfect. I found some stories middling compared to others, with endings that confused and fell short of resonance with me, while others sailed clean over my head and were simply not my thing. But I won’t say which ones, for all of this is a matter of mere opinion, which you might not find to be true and which is really my point.
A new year brings with it a new focus, and so I’ll focus on what I love. I loved Walls. It stroked my love of beast and tragic fantasy, and was a strong contender for my favourite wonder tale over all. I thought The Return of Lottie White clever and immensely enjoyable, and Speaking The Girls beautifully-written and yet another contender for overall favourite. The Descent of Man handled its premise and ideas so well as to leave me wanting more, and Godfather Death Part II won points for its narrative POV and having one of the strongest endings amongst all the stories.
I found The Great Hunger to be a wonderful coalescence between the Irish Potato Famine of 1845 and Hansel and Gretel, with traces of Peter Pan stirred in to darken the scent. Gold was quite funny, despite its rather abrupt and bleak ending, and Towards a Pure Land shone with characterization so emotively engaging and brilliant that my heart turned a cold, angry bitter at the ending, and I wanted to throttle the writer for thwarted hope I knew I had no right to feel. Which leaves the latest literary love of my life – Vasilisa, my favourite story, and my god, what perfection is here.
I anticipated reading this story most of all. Vasilisa tales are more often times than not inhabited by someone I love very much – Baba Yaga, the witch of the Iron Forest. There was no Baba in this Vasilisa story, but I was not disappointed. How could I be, with words so exquisite, a chase so surreal and loss so tragic it broke my heart as if it were my own? I’ve never read anything more perfect. And so it is with this anthology. It is as much home to thrills and enchantment as it is to uncertainty and fears, all of which you will gladly suffer, for all are shaping something, not just rich and strange … but rich and strange, and beautiful.
“What have you to offer me, poised on the edge of my life?” – Speaking the Girls, Karen Ginnane
“Soon, the battlefield was a mass of men, rippling, swelling and contracting like a flock of starlings in the early evening.” – Parchment, Matthew Willis
“That very hardest time of day is the hour after sunset when the whole world is tipped towards what it has lost and the sky is not yet done with bleeding.” – Vasilisa, Lorraine Wilson
Overall Orb Rating
4 Orbs – Shipshaped (I enjoyed the journey)
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